Tuesday, October 9, 2012

Sentence of the WEEEEEK!

John said, that's my coat.

 Jack said, I have a coat like yours.

Grandmother asked, did you plant beans, peppers, and melons in your garden?

William exclaimed, I can't believe we're finally here!

Emma replied, blue is my favourite colour.

Owen laughed your hair looks funny!

Teagan whined my tummy hurts.

Mark quizzed, what took you so long?

Add two sentences of your own to your submission. Use your name in one and mine in the other.

24 comments:

  1. Ravinder said, that his stomach hurts.

    Ms.Fraser replied, my favorite car is a ferrari.

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    1. Ravinder,
      You need to add in the quotation marks around the words that the people said. Please fix and repost it.

      Delete
  2. Tejasv

    John said, "That's my coat."

    Jack said, "I have a coat like yours."

    Grandmother asked, "Did you plant beans, peppers, and melons in your garden?"

    William exclaimed, "I can't believe we're finally here!"

    Emma replied, "Blue is my favourite colour."

    Owen laughed, "Your hair looks funny!"

    Teagan whined, "My tummy hurts."

    Mark quizzed, "What took you so long?"



    Tejasv groaned, "I'm stuffed."

    Mrs Fraser encouraged, "You can do it."

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  3. Sentence of the Weeeeeeeeek! Verda A.

    1. John said, “That’s my coat.”

    2. Jack said, “I have a coat like yours.”

    3. Grandmother asked, “Did you plant beans, peppers, and melons in your garden?”

    4. William exclaimed, “I can't believe we're finally here!”

    5. Emma replied, “Blue is my favourite colour.”

    6. Owen laughed, “Your hair looks funny!”

    7. Teagan whined, “My tummy hurts.”

    8. Mark quizzed, “What took you so long?”

    a) Verda asked, “What’s your favourite chocolate bar?”
    b) Mrs. Fraser replied, “My favourite chocolate bar is Kit-Kat.”

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  4. John said, "Thats my coat."

    Jack said, "i have a coat like yours."

    Grandmother asked,"did you plant beans,peppers and mealons in your garden?"

    William exclaimed,"i can't beleive we're finally here!"

    Emma replied,"blue is my favorite color."
    Owen laughed,"your hair looks funny!"
    Teagan whined," my tummy hurts."
    Mark quizzed,"what took you so long?"
    Sadie suggeusted,"the purple one looks nice."
    Summer wondered,"why the sky is blue?"

    sadie fowler


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    1. Sadie,
      You need to make the first word inside the quotation marks start with a capital letter (like it is the beginning of a sentence).

      Delete
  5. Alyssa.W

    John said, That's my coat."

    Jack said, "I have a coat like yours."

    Grandmother asked, Did you plant beans, peppers, and melons in your garden?"

    William exclaimed, "I can't believe we're finally here!"

    Emma replied," Blue is my favourite colour."

    Owen laughed, "Your hair looks funny!"

    Teagan whined, "My tummy hurts."

    Mark quizzed, "What took you so long?"

    Alyssa screamed, "I want some pancakes!"

    Sommer asked the class "What is your favourtie food?"

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  6. KELSIE Y:
    John said, "That's my coat."

    Jack said, "I have a coat like yours."

    Grandmother asked, "Did you plant beans, peppers, and melons in your garden?"

    William exclaimed, "I can't believe we're finally here!"

    Emma replied, "Blue is my favourite colour."

    Owen laughed, "Your hair looks funny!"

    Teagan whined, "My tummy hurts".

    Mark quizzed, "What took you so long?"


    Kelsie screamed, "Stop hitting me!"

    Summer asked, "Where's your homework?"

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  7. Jessica White
    John said, that's my coat.

    Jack said, I have a coat like yours.

    Grandmother asked, did you plant beans, peppers, and melons in your garden?

    William exclaimed, I can't believe we're finally here!

    Emma replied, blue is my favourite colour.

    Owen laughed, your hair looks funny!

    Teagan whined, my tummy hurts.

    Mark quizzed, what took you so long?

    Jessica asked, what for dinner?
    Ally asked, why are you so late?

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    1. Jessica,
      You need to add quotation marks around the words that each person said. Check Verda's and Tejasv's work for an example. Please fix it and repost.

      Delete
  8. John said, "That's my coat."

    Jack said, "I have a coat like yours."

    Grandmother asked, "Did you plant beans, peppers, and melons in your garden?:

    William exclaimed, "I can't believe we're finally here!"

    Emma replied, "Blue is my favourite colour."

    Owen laughed, "Your hair looks funny!"

    Teagan whined, "My tummy hurts."

    Mark quizzed, "What took you so long?"

    Mrs.Fraser questioned, "Where's Alessandra?"

    Lauren sang, "Wee are never ever ever getting back togetherr"

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  9. taylor jumped off the boat,and screamed that the water was cold

    mrs fraser was so tired form her sleepover, that she went to bed as soon as she got home.

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    1. Taylor,
      You need to add some capital letters and quotation marks to your work.
      Tweak your sentences so that some one is actually saying something in each one. For example:

      Taylor ran into the school yelling, "Everyone out! There's a tiger in here!"
      Please fix them and repost your work.

      Delete
  10. John said, "That's my coat."

    Jack said, "I have a coat like yours."

    Grandmother asked, "Did you plant beans, peppers, and melons in your garden?"

    William exclaimed, "I can't believe we're finally here!"

    Emma replied, "Blue is my favourite colour."

    Owen laughed, "Your hair looks funny!"

    Teagan whined, "My tummy hurts."

    Mark quizzed, "What took you so long?"

    Delvina asked, "Can you please help?"

    Mrs. Fraser replied, "Of course I can."

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  11. John said, "that's my coat."

    Jack said, "I have a coat like yours."

    Grandmother asked, "did you plant beans, peppers, and melons in your garden?"

    William exclaimed, "I can't believe we're finally here!"

    Emma replied, "blue is my favourite colour."

    Owen laughed "your hair looks funny!"

    Teagan whined "my tummy hurts."

    Mark quizzed, "what took you so long?"

    she whined, "I'm cold!"
    ry asked, "why mom?"

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    1. Not sure who this work belongs to, but there need to be some capital letters added to the first word in the dialogue and to all the proper nouns.

      Delete
  12. John said, "that's my coat."

    Jack said, "I have a coat like yours."

    Grandmother asked, "did you plant beans, peppers, and melons in your garden?"

    William exclaimed, "I can't believe we're finally here!"

    Emma replied," blue is my favourite colour."

    Owen laughed "your hair looks funny!"

    Teagan whined "my tummy hurts."

    Mark quizzed, "what took you so long?"

    Add two sentences of your own to your submission. Use your name in one and mine in the other.

    Amit asked, "what are you doing?"
    Mrs. Fraser asked," did you do your homework?"

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    1. Amit,
      You need to add capital letters to the first word inside the quotation marks.

      Delete
  13. John said, "that's my coat."

    Jack said, "I have a coat like yours."

    Grandmother asked, "did you plant beans, peppers, and melons in your garden?"

    William exclaimed, "I can't believe we're finally here!"

    Emma replied, "blue is my favourite colour."

    Owen laughed "your hair looks funny!"

    Teagan whined "my tummy hurts."

    Mark quizzed, "what took you so long?"

    Meagan questioned, "are you okay?"
    Summer asked, "how do you solve this answer?"

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    1. You need to add capital letters to the first word inside the quotation marks.

      Delete
  14. Brandon D
    1)John said, "that's my coat."
    2)Jack said, "I have a coat like yours."
    3)Grandmother asked, "did you plant beans,peppers and melons in your garden?"
    4)William exclaimed, "I cant believe we're finally here!"
    5)Emma replied,"blue is my favorite color."
    6)Owen laughed, "your hair looks funny!"
    7)Teagan whined, "my tummy hurts."
    8)Mark quizzed, "what took you so long?"
    9)Brandon said, "hi."
    10)"Mrs. Fraser, is a cool teacher."

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    1. You need to add capital letters to the first word inside the quotation marks.

      Delete
  15. - John said, " That's my coat."
    - Jack said, " I have a coat like yours."
    - Grandmother asked, " Did you plant beans, peppers, and melons in your garden?"
    - William exclaimed," I can't believe we're finnaly here!"
    - Emma replied, " Blue is my favorite color."
    - Owen laughed, " Your hair looks funny!"
    - Teagan whined, " My tummy hurts."
    - Mark quizzed, " What took you so long?"

    - Allann replied, " I'm not hungry."
    - Mrs. Fraser asked " Who made this big mess?"

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  16. John said, that's my coat.
    John said, "that's my coat."

    Jack said, I have a coat like yours.
    Jack said, "I have a coat like yours."

    Grandmother asked, did you plant beans, peppers, and melons in your garden?
    Grandmother asked, "Did you plant beans, peppers, and melons in your garden?"

    William exclaimed, I can't believe we're finally here!
    William exclaimed, "I can't believe we're finally here!"

    Emma replied, blue is my favourite colour.
    Emma replied, "Blue is my favourite colour."

    Owen laughed your hair looks funny!
    Owen laughed, "Your hair looks funny!"

    Teagan whined my tummy hurts.
    Teagan whined, "My tummy hurts."

    Mark quizzed, what took you so long?
    Mark quizzed, "What took you so long?"
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    Mrs. Fraser asked, "Are yiu ready for the math test?"

    Christina replied, "I'm good, thank you."

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